Writing

The haka was performed with the most energy in the world. They preformed it with all there energy that you could hear it miles away. The amount of people that got scared. It was the most shocking thing I have seen.

They came out with shocking cloths.They were wearing really short pants. They had tattoos on there faces. They looked like the scariest thing I've seen in my life. I didn't want to see another haka in my life.

Last of all they finished. That definitely made me want to not watch another haka in my life. I was so terrified. They said there purpose was to scare there enemy so when they vs them all they see is fear.

Writing

The haka was performed with the most energy in the world. They preformed it with all there energy that you could hear it miles away. The amount of people that got scared. It was the most shocking thing I have seen.

They came out with shocking cloths.They were wearing really short pants. They had tattoos on there faces. They looked like the scariest thing I've seen in my life. I didn't want to see another haka in my life.

Last of all they finished. That definitely made me want to not watch another haka in my life. I was so terrified. They said there purpose was to scare there enemy so when they vs them all they see is fear.

Writing

I ran across stage to see a lot of people staring at me. I looked at my cloths and I was wearing clown suit. I don't know what happen to me. I felt to like running back of the stage.

When everyone was laughing at me I ran back of the stage. I went into the corner of the backstage and sat there for along time. I wondered who put me in this suit well I was asleep.

I went to walk around backstage looking for someone that looks suspicious. I came across a guy that was staring at me in a weird way. So I went up to him and said was it you that put me in this dress. He answered "No that guy over there starring at the stage put you in that dress".

I walked up to him and told him " Why did you put me in this dress", He replied " Our show needed something funny to come out so we dressed you up while you were sleeping". I told him that it was ok but next time tell me that you going to dress me up.

Writing

People a being killed by trains.Passengers should be aware of trains because trains a really quiet. We need to look at the poles that signal if a train is coming. If the signal doesn't work you still might have to look.

When you going on a train you need to make sure You got everything you need before you leave house or your car. If you do forget you got to make big decision. You also need to check if you have everything that you have with you.

When you get on the train you make sure your earphones is of because you might not see the signal or hear. You might just walk across and get bumped of by the train.

If you're are at the train station and you see the train coming and a person is about to cross, yell out to that person and say ‘’ Stop and wait for the train’’ or you could tell the security. If they don’t listen you could go and pull them back.  

Fundraising for our camp

The day started so cold. So I went and got heaps of jumpers on so that It wouldn’t be cold any more.

I was glad that we were going to do a carwash for our school carwash. I got very happy and started running outside cause I was excited. It was a very exciting day for me. I was very excited because I was going to be washing cars with my friends because this is how we making money for our` camp. Also because This was for our camp.

When we were going to school at 7.30am, there was no one there  so I went with my dad to Tamaki college, then I walked back to Glenbrae school at 8.00 am. When I got there, I saw a lot of kids setting up for the car wash.

After the student and teachers finished setting up the things for the carwash. They started to do the car washing liquid in the bucket so they can start to wash Mrs Elia’s car.

When some of the student finished washing Mrs Elias car they started to wash Mr Nath’s car. Then more cars started to come in, and we started to work faster because their were more cars that come in.

When most of the cars were already washed that's when I got very wet so I went to change out of my wet clothes and changed into my dry clothes and then I didn’t go back to wash any more cars.

Last of all,  it was time for people to start packing up their carwash things and go home. It was very cool because I got to be with my friends and wash cars with them to earn money for our camp.

We raised around $900 and that was a good result for only 4 hours of hard work. I hope we make a lot more money next time.

If I was a sports commentator at the Commonwealth Games...

In the Commonwealth games I would be a commentator because I would get to talk about people. What I would talk about is how they are doing at their sport.

Next I would like to talk about the weight lifting because they would be lifting weights and I will be like, “ohh!! HE IS GOING TO lift it hes going...”. Oh wait a minute ... it falls and I would be laughing hard out.

Then I would be talking about swimming because they will be be doing swimming style that I have never seen and I would be saying NZ is always winning. NZ people are always winning because they are always the best in the world except for Usain Bolt.

 Usain Bolt comes from Jamaica. He is fast so when he runs I would be like “Go Usain Bolt” and he will win all his running games. Running games will be cool to come because the first person will be coming first then the last person will catch up to him and he will come first.

POWHIRI

Hello My name is Taki and will be telling you about my day today so far.

Today when I went to school there was something going on.When I got there, there were heaps of sausages.After I had my sausages I had some drinks and I had apple juice and it was so nice.

When I came back from the toilet Hana was doing a Samoan dance and Mr Nath gave her some money for dancing. After she was dancing, the boys came and did their Tongan dance.

Next when we finished we had to go in to the class because the bell rang.When the bell rang Miss Elia asked us to come down to the hall sensibly because the Mayor was at school.

When we got in the hall there was this lady that called the mayor and his crew into the hall.In the hall the Mayor Len brown was talking to us kids and it was funny because we copied what he said.

When Len Brown finished talking we started to sing songs and we sang E Tasi Ae Lasi.When we finished E Tasi Ae lasi we sang all the other songs and it was cool because I sang very loudly.

Last of all, we all went outside to go and see the sod turning and it was cool.When they did the sod turning we sang Te Aroha and when we finished sod turning we went and meet Len Brown then it was time to class.

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Endangered whales

Why are whales endangered?

Whales are endangered because of oil spills from ships.These oil spills are polluting the sea so whales are dying.Oil spills can affect the food chain.When whales eat oil-infected animals in the sea it can affect them because oil can injure the eyes and lungs.

Whales are also endangered because whalers are using their fishing nets to catch them.Using fishing nets catches a large number of whales.Whalers also use drift nets which catch whatever swims into them,including whales.These whales get tangled up in the nets and drown.

Ships often go very fast and can accidently ram into whales.Whales hit by these ships can be seriously injured,losing parts of their tails to propeller blade or dyes.

Reports on whales

    wHALES

Whales are the largest animals in the sea.They are part of the mammal group and also part of the dolphin family.

Whales are the largest type of sea mammal. They can be many different shapes and colors according to their species, however. For instance, a beluga whale is white, and orcas are mostly

The blue whale is found mostly in cold and temperate waters. It prefers deeper ocean waters to coastal waters.They are a global species, blue whales are in nearly every oceans on the planet, from north to south

A whale always need to come to the top of the water so they can blow water out of there blowhole.It also swims with is tail and it hart is as big as an boat.

Some of the facts of whales are that they are the size of a two storey house and also can grow up to as long as two buses.A blue whale's head length is 25% of its body length.The whale’s favorite seafood is an stingray

Now we come to the end of my report on whales.If you want more information you can go to these sites:

http://www.ask.com/web?qsrc=1&o=100080&l=dir&q=whales&qo=serpSearchTopBox

A narrative I wrote.

The dry ground crunched under Jesse’s foot. He glanced to the left as he was walking home.

Then when his mum came out she saw the ground cracking so she ran into the house because she might fall into one of the cracks.

When dad was coming from the town, the road was cracking then all the towers fell into the crack when Superman, Hulk, Captain America , Ironman,  Spiderman, Batman, Green lantern came to save the city.

Last of all when they came they fixed all of the cracks then they all disappeared straight away because they had a different city to save.

Softball lesson

First thing this morning we went to our own fantastic softball lesson with our teacher and we had to line up outside our classroom.We were so happy to go to our own softball lesson with our Teacher.

Then Mrs Tofa got us in to our own 2 softball groups. We were excited to get our gloves and to use the bat.

Our group started with fielding and we got the other team out by catching the ball when they hit it.

Later it was our turn to have a go at batting the ball and it was so fantastic. I was so happy and we were cheering for our team then "bang" when Mafoa hit the ball.When the ball was coming he smashed it away. We felt safe on the chair because the ball could not hit us.

Last of all Mrs Tofa said  to came and sit on the ground because there were some things we had to discuss about our lesson. Then we talked about how to hit the ball and identify where the bases are because some people did not know the bases were.