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Wednesday 31 August 2016

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People a being killed by trains.Passengers should be aware of trains because trains a really quiet. We need to look at the poles that signal if a train is coming. If the signal doesn't work you still might have to look.


When you going on a train you need to make sure You got everything you need before you leave house or your car. If you do forget you got to make big decision. You also need to check if you have everything that you have with you.


When you get on the train you make sure your earphones is of because you might not see the signal or hear. You might just walk across and get bumped of by the train.

If you're are at the train station and you see the train coming and a person is about to cross, yell out to that person and say ‘’ Stop and wait for the train’’ or you could tell the security. If they don’t listen you could go and pull them back.  

1 comment:

Danni Stone said...

Hi Taki, this is great advice and I like that you have written one point per paragraph! Remember to read through and edit your work, but I know you all had to complete this writing in one lesson.

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