It was a nice day, Neville and Tom were excited to go and buy themselves a car. It look really nice.
This car was one of the top that the shop was selling.They got the car and left straight away. They took it for a quick drive around the city before they took it back home.
They got home and put the car in the garage, they locked the garage so no one in there family can take the keys and drive off with the car. They even had security camera.
In the morning they took the car for a ride again, but this time they went up the mountain. They didn’t take the road but they took the rocky roads.They didn’t know that there were a lot of holes in the ground.
They were speeding up the road, then suddenly they hit a big hole. The car got wrecked at the bottom and there front lights cam of. They got so scared.
After crying for a while, they finally remembered that they had insurance on there car. They called AA and they came and picked up the car and took it to where they can fix the car.
1 month later they received there Nissan car. They were so happy they even celebrated 1 whole day just cause they got there car back.
They went to rainbow end for the next day. They had a lot of fun playing and going on all the rides.
2 comments:
Hi Taki. I am really impressed with how you followed the structure of a narrative like we have discussed in class I could clearly see the beginning, middle and end and understood what was happening throughout the story.
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