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Friday 2 August 2013

Story Review

Centre Stage By Kenn Benn

The story is about Donna who was going to perform in front of the school.
The characters in the story are Donna, Alice, Tama and Mr Warner.
The story  takes place at school.
The main problem was the stage because Tama and Alice did not turn the stage properly.

The characters solved the problem because Tama used a felt tip pen to mark the stage’s starting point. The thing I like about the story is that the stage turns.  


2 comments:

Mr. Nath said...

Well done Taki. This is a good review of the story you have read this week.

Tsana Plessius said...

Kia ora Taki,
Well done on a good story review. It sounds as if Tama had to find new ways to make it better, something we should all try to do.
Tsana (Karl & Robin's mum)

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