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Friday, 1 November 2013

Picnic at Maraetai beach

picnic at maraetai beach.


Last Saturday my family and a friend went to maraetai beach in our family van.  I was very excited to get there.

When we got there we had set the picnic out,then we ate it.After the picnic we went for a swim then my friend Jayden was drowning because he swam too far out and couldn't touch the ground.No one heard him screaming for help then my Dad turned around saw him,he swam out and got him and brought him back to shore.After that  we went back home,Jayden ask if he could have an ice cream.Taki said’’ do you have money” Jayden said ‘’no’’,Taki said ‘’I have lots of money I am sososo rich’’.

BY TAKI.

Narrative witing


Sela and Saia.

Once there was a man name Saia and the old lady was Sela.


They were next door neighbors and Sela asked Saia if he could walk to the cool shop down the road and get Sela some apples, vegetables and some drinks to drink and then Saia will pay Sela some money tomorrow because Saia money’s is gone today.  Then Saia said do you want to walk with me.


Sela said yes. Then they walked to the shop and then they went to go they then came back and went to their homes. Sela rang Saia and said if he wants to come and have dinner at my place and Saia said yes.

After they had dinner Saia went back home and he was so happy that he had dinner with Sela because he had no dinner. Finally the next day Sela payed Saia for buying Selas food from the cool shop.